TSBO Novel Passages

Sharon Lathan

Sharon Lathan is the best-selling author of The Darcy Saga, a ten-volume sequel series to Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice.

Subscribe
Notify of
guest

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

3 COMMENTS
Inline Feedbacks
View all comments
Sharon

Have no fear Esther Ann! The continuing part you speak of follows right after this section! I only posted the part that I had to change. The "I love you" declaration remains intact exactly as it was written originally! I was very fortunate in that I really had to alter very little.

Thanks for the positive comments!

Esther Ann

Hi Sharon!

I like the rewritten parts listed above. You have done a spectacular revision. The only part I miss is where Lizzy tells William that she loves him and he asks her to "say it again". That was such a wonderful part in the initial version you wrote.

I can understand why you have to do the rewriting because of copyright rules and regulations. IMHO, I think the rewritten parts add more to the book; not that it was lacking in the first place. I will definitely want to get a copy of the published version to compare with your initial version.

I am glad to see you didn’t have to make too many changes from your original writing.

Thank you for keeping us so up to date on the revisions.

Take care and God Bless.

Esther

May

I have printed this out in order to read it in detail, but I just love how you have caught Darcy’s fear and trepidation that Lizzie will reject him and his wonder that she actually didn’t (outside Longbourne) And he is like a fine wine isn’t he? You are a wonderful writer Sharon.

3
0
Would love your thoughts, please comment.x
()
x